*Daybe 7/18 - Printable Version +- International Simulation Football League (https://forums.sim-football.com) +-- Forum: Community (https://forums.sim-football.com/forumdisplay.php?fid=5) +--- Forum: Graphics (https://forums.sim-football.com/forumdisplay.php?fid=39) +---- Forum: Graded Weekly Submissions (https://forums.sim-football.com/forumdisplay.php?fid=41) +---- Thread: *Daybe 7/18 (/showthread.php?tid=14314)

*Daybe 7/18 - Daybe - 07-18-2019 EDITION #2: (grade whichever is better) *Daybe 7/18 - Eco - 08-03-2019 3/5 for the first one. The effects around/behind the render is pretty dope. The NSFL logo on the render is very well done but the Wraiths logo does not look as good. This would have been a 4 if you swapped the colors on the jersey. The biggest problem with the sig is the text. I think it is too small and the spot you put it on makes it feel like it was slapped on at the end. 3/5 for the second one as well. Love the background and the filter layer on top of it. The jersey work is better than the first one but the mixture of red and orange feels off. The Otters logo would feel so much better if the color of the helmet was not red. I am not a huge fan of the effects on this one, but that might be a personal thing. The biggest problem is once again the text. I love the font and the size could have been a little larger but the biggest issue is the text color. It just does not pop. @Daybe