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*R. Leaf Jr - KillKillKill - 11-28-2019 *R. Leaf Jr - Rising Equinox - 12-12-2019 (3/5 - $700k) I'm going to give this a 3/5. There's definitely render editing here, and I believe there's enough of that and overall work here to get the 3. The text works well with the sig, and I think the color choice was spot on, blending nicely with the rest of the sig and the Butchers logo. I can't really go any higher than a 3 though, because the work is a little sloppy. You can still see the outline of the previous background around the renders. It looks like a lot of it is kind of masked by the drop shadow behind the render, but it just makes it look messy, because it's still definitely there. Also, the placement of the elements in the sig could definitely use some work. Most of the logo and part of the Butchers name is actually being covered. This can work, depending on the sig and design/style, but it just doesn't seem like it was meant to be covered up, so it seems out of place. Nice work overall! If it was a little cleaner, this would probably be closer to a 4.