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*Jacoby Clay GFX Submissions - Vexatious - 01-21-2020 *Jacoby Clay GFX Submissions - Nokazoa - 02-02-2020 Sig 1: 2.5/5 - 550k - The biggest thing holding this back is the Jersey swap. With the render being so prominent the swap is holding it back. I know however, that this is in part to software limitations and experience so I awarded an extra .5. While you background and text work together, its all fairly simple without some of the subtleties of more refined signatures. I would say this is a great starting point and with a few minor tweaks, you could get a 3. Sig 2: 3.5/5 - 850k - I have done an edit for this sig a while ago, so I am not going into much detail on how to fix these issues, as you can refer back to that conversation and sig. That said, I will talk about what needed improvement and what worked. On your text, it works for the most part, but it becomes hard to read, particualrly the "Jacoby Clay" text. The helmet being that bright purple was also another issue, and the Lens flare was a nice idea, but I think it gets too clutter on the left side. Lastly, I think a color balance to bring out the greens would have sealed this into the next level. Total: 1.4m