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*(S22) - Fernando Cruz - OL - fcruz - 02-18-2020 *(S22) - Fernando Cruz - OL - Nokazoa - 03-07-2020 3/5 - 700k - Pretty good first attempt. Biggest issues you have here are your background and render. For the render I think some of the issue is that it is an older render so the photo quality can be on the poorer side. I think that is what is happening here. If you went with a smaller signature size or picked a higher quality photo, that could help. On your background there doesn't seem to be a lot of blending going on, and there is little playing with light and shadows. Thus leaving the sig suffering in cohesiveness. That said, I like the text and your use of space. Hope to see more |