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Stryker Brown Sig - chxhawk - 09-19-2022 RE: Stryker Brown Sig - xQCFamous - 10-02-2022 Graphic 1 - 3/7 - Really think this has potential here, just more quality time needs to be spent bringing it all together. For me, the biggest hits are that there is a clear background, a clear font/text choice used and a render, but the downside is that with such a large canvas size, a lot of it just feels unused and really unbalanced. Some lighting, a better render cut (can see the edges from the background) and some blending techniques would make this go a long way. Graphic 2 - 3/7 - Similar to the above, my critiques are nearly identical since the style is so similar. Everything is there to consider this a true 'graphic', but it feels just more... rushed and slapped together than calculated and thought out. The render has a noticeable white outline and even pieces of the background still visible, the bag as well just kind of seems thrown in there with some text just kind of... wherever lol. More percise blending/lighting/texture techniques could really tie this together and help boost your scores <3 good job