(10-20-2019, 12:14 PM)Eco Wrote:4/5: The render work is top notch. I don't really like how the smoke effect looks. I wish you picked a thicker font at least for the player name. @Eco thanks for the grade. Can you elaborate a bit on what could have been done to make it look better, or what isn't doing it for you?
The only reason I didn't give this a 5 is the text. I just don't like how this light font looks, it makes the text feel like an afterthought. I can ask someone else to take a second look if you like.
(10-20-2019, 08:15 PM)Eco Wrote:The only reason I didn't give this a 5 is the text. I just don't like how this light font looks, it makes the text feel like an afterthought. I can ask someone else to take a second look if you like. Thank for the response! I wouldn't mind getting another opinion, but I don't really have an issue with the grade, just looking to keep learning and improving. I did make a conscious decision to go with a thinner script font for this one, but I totally get if it didn't turn out well.
Honestly I love thinner/lighter fonts, especially the ones that look like handwriting. However using them as the primary font for sigs don't work well. If you were to use a thicker font for the players name and then keep the thinner font for the team name/position, it would have looked better.
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