10-25-2019, 05:57 PM (This post was last modified: 10-25-2019, 05:58 PM by Nokazoa.)
2.5/5 550k So I'm going to start with things I like. I like that you have the "Armor" text set behind the render, and having the foot resting on the logo is a nice idea. I also looked up your render image and found your original, so I know that you did some minor editing on the render itself with the red and the cutting out the TNT detonator. That said, the signature itself does suffer from a lack of cohesion. None of your elements really flow into each other. With all that said, the graders felt that you did more than most 2's so we awarded a bonus.
Some things that could help: making the render larger (you either want to have a lot of space between the render and the edge or have the render cut off by more than a little), adding a stroke layer effect to the text, perhaps a pattern inside it also, and filling the empty space more. On this sig, you could have made the "King" text larger and make use of the excess space.
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