*adam2552 11/21

[adam2552]

[Nokazoa]

3/5 850k. Good effort. I think some of the issues are depth and the text. I'll start with the text, you typically don't want to have your text in the corners. You can have it behind the render like you do, but it feels very cramped over there. I think it would have been better off in a different placement and spaced out more. I usually put mine over the render also, and I think with that kind of helmet you would have been able to do so without much worry. I bring up the helmet because putting the text over the render on this one won't make the render second fiddle to the text. Depth wise it comes from the illusion I believe you were going for. The faded edges of the bg makes it feel like you want the render to be coming out of the bg, but as it stands you don't have the render's bottom hidden. Then you also have the hands cut off. On a sig with a "full" background that's fine, but it gets cut off in the "empty" space. I also wasn't sure what team this was for, and while that is not a huge issue, I think you had the space to add a logo on the jersey.