11-17-2019, 07:57 PM
(This post was last modified: 12-03-2019, 11:40 PM by Rising Equinox.)
11-17-2019, 07:57 PM
(This post was last modified: 12-03-2019, 11:40 PM by Rising Equinox.)
I'm going to give these a 4 and 3 respectively.
(4/5 - 1M) The first one is awesome, with really only a few minor changes I would make. The jersey swap and the render itself are fantastic. I can tell a lot of work was put into those. Even the hair strands are cut out nicely, and the Pythons logo looks like it actually belongs on the jersey. But, there are a couple details that bug me, keeping it from being higher than a 4. First, the black outline of the background is a little bumpy/rough in a few areas. I feel like it wouldn't be as noticeable if the black wasn't as pronounced in it, or if the outline itself wasn't as thick as it is. Also, the text seems a little cluttered with all the textures, lines, etc going on around and on top of it. Maybe getting rid of the white outline of the name from behind the front text would clear up some of that space. Overall, really great graphic and nice work! (3/5 - 700k) The second one is also very nice work, but I feel like the few problems with it are more noticeable and stand out more than the first one and keep it from being as high as a 4. Again, great work on the jersey swap and render, but the logo on the jersey could definitely use a little blending work or something. It doesn't really look like it's part of the jersey. Another thing is the background. I really like the Hawks logo and what looks like fire overlayed on top of it; that's really nice. But, the light effect on top of that just feels weird and out of place to me. Also, with the name text, I love that gold text and the background inside of it. It fits really well with the rest of the graphic and looks really nice, but the color on the last name looks kind of strange. I think if it was a little darker, it wouldn't draw as much attention away from the rest of the sig. Great work again! |
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