4.5/5 - 1.25m- Alright I've thought it over and looked at what you are going for, and I well adjust your grade when I get off work. That said I don't think you've quite hit a 5. Those example I gave you are from a different gfx head who had different values than me, and I'm much harder on grading. I should have said so.
I think the issues that are holding you back are the fact your player gets lost til the end. The camera, like in your video, should pan into your player and potentially track it though I believe you can pull it off without it. Also it comes off as similar views of the same play. Your effects are nice, though some of my graders felt overdone. Style doesn't really factor into many of my grades but it may have here.
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I think the issues that are holding you back are the fact your player gets lost til the end. The camera, like in your video, should pan into your player and potentially track it though I believe you can pull it off without it. Also it comes off as similar views of the same play. Your effects are nice, though some of my graders felt overdone. Style doesn't really factor into many of my grades but it may have here.
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