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Word Count: 3157
Payout: 3.7 Mil (Rounded Up to the 3200 word payout)
Commentary: Good effort on this piece. It was definitely well written. Happy to see that your player was a bully as a child, good road to becoming a football player. Throwing dead cats in peoples faces, no surprise nobody wanted to be your friend. And you kept a mental list? You were a goddamn lunatic and so was this dude Mitch for being near you. Glad to see your player eventually smartens up and gets away from soccer. It'll be interesting to see how your dead dad motivates you in the next part of the story. Good job :lol:
Word Count: 3157
Payout: 3.7 Mil (Rounded Up to the 3200 word payout)
Commentary: Good effort on this piece. It was definitely well written. Happy to see that your player was a bully as a child, good road to becoming a football player. Throwing dead cats in peoples faces, no surprise nobody wanted to be your friend. And you kept a mental list? You were a goddamn lunatic and so was this dude Mitch for being near you. Glad to see your player eventually smartens up and gets away from soccer. It'll be interesting to see how your dead dad motivates you in the next part of the story. Good job :lol:
WR- JAMAL SLICK JR.
"THE NEW ERA"
MR 8X ULTIMUS CHAMPION
QB Mike Boss - HOF
TE Johnny Blaze - HOF
QB Mike Boss Jr
WR Johnny Blaze Jr
QB Mike Boss - HOF
TE Johnny Blaze - HOF
QB Mike Boss Jr
WR Johnny Blaze Jr