This is dope! My only complaint is how it cuts off part of the B at the bottom, but at a different place than the smoke/Berry. and maybe the shoulder stripes.
Yours are so hard to grade because there are things that are absolute fire, and other small errors that my eyes are just drawn too. I have a feeling that the more you work at it, you could get to enigmatic levels, but there are a few areas we need to work on and with the new payout structure, we are being extra strict. With that, on this one I will first second what infinite said. Be wary of where images cut off because sometimes it feels like it is off on accident instead of a design choice. Second, I would have liked to see more render work. I get it for this one since it is a red jersey on a red team so I didn't actually downgrade you for it. Lastly, your team logos. For some reason my eyes are always drawn to them and can tell they are pasted on instead of naturally on the jersey. We want the sig to look like the logo was always there. A few tricks to help, and you can DM me, eco, infinite, or others for guidance. First, messing with the blur, opacity, color, lightsource or other effects may allow the logo to appear like it belongs there better as well as adding a semi transparent layer to the entire sig that allows everything to blend better. DM me as always.