05-13-2019, 12:46 AM
(This post was last modified: 05-22-2019, 02:49 AM by Pizza-faith.)
Ready to be graded
For MooseCop
Logan Uchiha
For MooseCop
Logan Uchiha
05-13-2019, 12:46 AM
(This post was last modified: 05-22-2019, 02:49 AM by Pizza-faith.)
Ready to be graded
For MooseCop Logan Uchiha
05-16-2019, 05:59 AM
(This post was last modified: 05-17-2019, 01:01 PM by Pizza-faith.)
updated 1st post
Sorry for the long time in grading these!
1) 3/5 I really like this one. The main issues I have with it is the lack of depth with the text and logo, as well as the portrait layout. First, the logo stands out in a bad way because everything else has work done to it, the jersey colorized, the background effects, even the text has transparency, but the logo is just there. Second, the portrait style leads everything to be clustered together. I do like the drowning out render in all red, I just wish it meshed with the rest of the sig better. 2) 3/5 I like the choice of the artistic background and making the render semitransparent. I makes the entire pic blend together. But once you get beyond the textured effect, it doesn't have a whole lot else. That and rule of Thirds. 3) 2/5 This is the hardest for me to say because I am super close to a 3. The jersey recolor is mostly well done, and the transparent render could be cool. The main reason for the low grade is 3 things that I can't stop seeing. First, His name is Bucky Barnes, Not Brooks, lol. Second, something happened with your render cut out around the right ear hole in which you lost some of the helmet. Third, the NFL logo on the jersey was just grayed out instead of removed or replaced with a different logo. Fix these and it would be a higher value. 4) 2/5 I'm sure the jersey recolor took quite a bit of work, it's just that it ended in a cross between purple and dark red, and I would have liked a bigger change. The rest is just the logo and oil effect. 5) 3/5 I think this one just left too much transparency. It drowns out the whole sig. Additionally, I found the background pick online, and you should have left it wide! wider is better in sig creations. i do like that you are experimenting with new techniques and styles 6) 2/5 cool background choice, it is just the text/ logo/ and render don't blend together. I do like the darkened jersey though. 7) 2/5 Much better sizing, and I do like the rest of it, but the mexican flag behind the logo gets lost and it is hard to tell what you are going for without zoming in. I also don't like to be too nitpicky, but the render cuts off before the bottom of the sig. 8) 4/5 Great render work, super sick. This might be the one I bumped up do to the delay in grading but what the hell. I like the colors and desert theme. Only things I would recommend, allow the logo to blend in more with the sig, maybe make it extra transparent in the sky or something. 9) 1/5 It's still good, just only a little different then the previous so less work. 10) 3/5 First, careful borrowing other people's art without claiming it. Having said that, I appreciate the work needed to make the logo and the render look more painted. DM me with any questions or comments. |
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