@roastfuego made a sig for ya
2/5 (400k x 4 = 1.6m) What is hurting these the most is the lack of render editing and the text.
I think the first one is pretty solid, color-wise, with the warm to cool transition between the brass and the polar bear; however, the text draws the eye a lot. In my opinion too much. The logo in the text also blends too much with the white polar bear where the white of the logo meets the edge. In your other sigs you posted, you have a stroke around the text, and I think that's the move here. The second and third sigs are very similar so I can lump these together. There is depth in these two sigs and with the stacking it works; however, your text colors struggle to do more than just "exist" within the piece. Again, a logo/jersey swap or some adjustment layers could have helped the piece. I also think you should have something clipping into the text. I usually use a spacescape as it makes it interesting but doesn't draw the eye as much. The fourth one is the strongest, but it falls short. I think the photo chosen could have been different. The current one better serves as one of those secondary renders in the bg. Again the photo isn't edited in what looks to be any meaningful way, and I would argue that placing the TIJ logo on the helmet would have pushed you over to a 2.5 on this one. I also don't like how the burst effect looks. I would say it would be fine in a different color perhaps. Maybe white? Also, you have some smoke coming off the sig. I imagine it had to do with not being within the clipping mask. Happens to us all. |
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