*(S22) - Johnny Hellzapoppin - S

[Colabear]

[KoltClassic]

3/5. The swap/cut is pretty good, just some minor cleanup that you can see a lot around the edges. I think the idea of the text works composition-wise and I appreciate the detail to adding the depth of it going "through" the player, but the quality of the text isn't great ( lots of pixels and artifacts around it ) and some work could be done to make sure that the text feels more integrated with the sig as a whole. There is a lot of empty space in the top left that I think could have been utilized with the text as well, possibly something like having some text in both corners to further highlight the diagonal aspect of the sig. There hasn't been much differentiation between the player as the focal point and everything else besides the brightness difference; adding in some additional effects around the player, or some more noise to the background could help make the render pop more.