2.5/5 - 550k - You cut is very clean, and your text layout is a nice idea. I think you could have used your space better, and brighten up the render more. I also find the NSFL logo unnecessary, but I always do. As he is a prospect, I can't fault for lack of cut, so all in all, good job.
I made a mistake and didnt pay this out, Also I missed the Logo.
1/3 - 450,000 - "1/3 is a logo that NSFL/DSFL teams most likely would not use but obvious some effort was put into designing these logos" I think that describes it pretty well. I like the branding idea, but it needs a lot of refinements.