McGriddy 9/17 - 9/24

[McGriddy10]

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[electrictree]

told ya i'd give a brief critique for you...will go one by one. Keep practising you're off to a great start!!!

1. 3/5 - 2m
Nice work on the jersey swap, this carries your grade. not much of a background and simple text.

2. 3/5 - 2m
I like the text better on this one and the swap a little less. glad you moved the render down to the bottom. not much done to the bg, if anything at all.

3. 2.5/5 - 1.4m
Similar in style here to 2. Def like what you were trying to go for with the player coming out of the stadium.

4. 3/5 - 2m
lol nice idea with the head on the head. the four arms looks a bit awkward but this is your best jersey swap for sure.

5. 3/5 - 2m
another nice swap, these are really good! nice job experimenting with the style and background. text could use some work, will get better as you keep working!

Total = 9.4m

If you have questions about your grade, you can message myself or @zeagle1 , or submit your submission for arbitration here: https://forums.sim-football.com/showthre...?tid=21442